sanity examine [resume review]

I've been making use of to early profession positions in commodities for just a few months now with little or no luck–I made it to the screening stage for a market analyst place at Phillips 66, however apart from that I've had zero bites. Simply attempting to verify I haven't made some huge fake in my resume pas since I'm not overly conversant in the trade. I'd admire any pointers, or only a affirmation that it’s certainly that aggressive. Ought to I strive making use of in US/Europe?